К основному контенту
 Essay

 What movie, poem, musical composition, or novel has most influenced your life and the way that you view the world? Why?
Some people think that movies , poetry , music can influence us, our life , the way that we view the world. However there are some people who have another opinion.
First of all , i think that movies, books and music have the great influence on people. As for me, the movie which has most influenced my life and the way that i view the world is Harry Potter, all parts. It may sound stupid, but this film has taught me to believe in magic, in true friendship , and that there is always a way from any situation. I watched the first film in my childhood and since then i'm in love with this sroty. The second point is that movies , books and music can take us from difficult situations and help us to overcome them. For example, when i have some bad situations i listen to my favourite groups  and singers such as Imagine Dragons, Kodaline, Lady Gaga and so on, and they distruct me from my problems.  

Nevertheless there are some people who think that movies , books , and music have no influence on us and our lives. It happens because there are some nonsense films which can't influence us and the same about books and songs. Moreover these things are inanimate, so they can't change people and their views of the world.

In conclusion i want to say that movies , books and music are the integral part of our life. They can influence some people , but not all. Anyway we should read more books , watch good films and listen to good music to develop ourselves.

Комментарии

  1. Natalia Eydelman18 марта 2019 г. в 17:46

    Julia,

    you have made your opinion clear and supported it with some personal examples. However, I think your essay needs to be further developed to make it more substantial. For example, you could, actually should add several more points on both sides of the issue you have discussed in your work. The paragraph discussing the opposite point of view is contains just 2 sentences.

    Also, try not to use "In conclusion I would like to say"; it is better to just state your opinion, which should make it clear that this is what you think.

    ОтветитьУдалить
  2. Natalya Kholina2 апреля 2019 г. в 01:45

    Этот комментарий был удален автором.

    ОтветитьУдалить
  3. Natalya Kholina2 апреля 2019 г. в 01:46

    Этот комментарий был удален автором.

    ОтветитьУдалить
  4. Natalya Kholina2 апреля 2019 г. в 01:47

    Julia, your essay is interesting, but here're the things:
    Be careful with (,)! :) Almost everywhere you put some space bw them without any purpose;
    Pronoun "I" should be capitalized;
    "However there are some ..." After introductory word you should put (,)
    Something like that ;)

    ОтветитьУдалить

Отправить комментарий

Популярные сообщения из этого блога

FOR AND AGAINST ESSAY Eating Meat is Good and Necessary for People Eating is the big part of our life. Meat is a product that plays an important role for human organism.Nowdays there are a lot of people who don't eat meat,and it is their choice. Moreover, there are a lot of arguments about eating meat is good or not.  First of all, meat contains a huge amount of protein,which is actively involved in the strengthening and development of our body. For example, it is involved in the creation of hemoglobin which supplies our blood with oxygen. Moreover protein is one of the basic nutrients necessary for human. The second point is that meat gives us strength, and especially for men it is very important to be strong. If we don't eat meat we become weak and lethargic. Another reason is that meat contains a lot of elements that are responsible for the quality of our skin,hair,nails, and without it, for example,our hair will fall out and nails will deterioate. How...
3 комментария
Далее...
Hello everyone! Today i'd like to share with you one website  about Writing in English. I have chosen this site because there you can watch videolessons from native speakers, who can  tell you about for example 10 phrasal verbs for Academic Writing in English, or how to write business letters, etc. Moreover you can choose your level, topic and a teacher, and find an approrpiate material for you.  For example  you can find there the information about : 1)10 pharsal verb for Academic Writing in English 2)How to write business letters 3)Writing transitions 4)Punctuation 5)Spelling and so on and so on. There is a lot of useful information not only about writing, and also about grammar, vocabulary, moreover there are videolessons about IELTS and TOEFL exams,so if you are going to pass them it might be useful. In my opinion videolessons is the easiest  and convenient way to learn something new. So, check this site, i hope you'll like it and find it us...
3 комментария
Далее...
Blogpost One:Yayoi Kusama review-about as artistic as a lava lamp   Dear All, Recently I've read an article in the Guardian. I've chosen it because i saw the picture(which you can see below) on the first page, and i wanted to know what it is and it seemed to me interesting. This article was about Yaoi Kusama's instalation Infinity Mirrored Room in the Victoria Miro Gallery in London. The author of this article Jonathan Jones wrote about his impressions after he visited this place. He couldn't take this instalation too seriously, and he thinks that it doesn't reach  inside people's heads and they don't feel anything when they see it. He compares Infinity Mirrored Room with lava lamps. Jonathan doesn't consider that it is art, it is more like fashion show for him. Actually, i haven't heard about Yaomi Kusama before and i haven't seen her works,but when i saw a photo of this instalation i was impressed and i liked it.  Also in the...
5 комментариев
Далее...